Was I Ida Strauss

I have a fear of drowning in deep waters, dark and cold;
I dream the waves are parted revealing Death's threshold.

I wonder, trembling in my bed, if another life I've known;
is there a body beneath the sea, dissolved, bone of my bone?

                        * * * * * * * * * * * * * 

We boarded the Titanic, her maiden voyage from the shore,
just the two of us together, me and my husband Isidore.

Grandly cradled on the ocean within the ship of dreams,
unaware an ice tower waited in the frigid, black extremes.

Roast squab and French ice creams, champagne and caviar
were the first class luxuries, sailing on beneath the stars.

Near midnight the vessel shuddered as though wounded in the heart;
we waited captain's orders to load the lifeboats, disembark.

"Women first!" the crew commanded; older men could also go,
but Isidore would not depart, the truest gentleman I know.

He entreated me to leave the ship, but like Ruth of long ago, 
I replied, "We've lived together many years. Where you go, I go."

We faced Death as we faced life, companions to the end . . .
climbing the staircase to heaven, hand in hand with my best friend.


The story of Isidore and Ida Strauss is true; they were first class passengers on the Titanic. Isidore was co-owner of Macy's. My connection to Ida is fiction.
The grand staircase on the Titanic was called "the staircase to Heaven."

Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright, June 22, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 6/30/2014 2:51:00 PM
I got cold chills and a lump in my throat reading this...Congrats my friend! You are DEFINITELY on a roll - Tim
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Date: 6/30/2014 12:21:00 AM
Great absorbing and engaging story, Faye, congrats on the win
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Date: 6/29/2014 8:25:00 PM
AVery nice write Faye....Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/29/2014 8:07:00 PM
Great story, great write and great win my friend!!
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Date: 6/29/2014 7:44:00 PM
What a fantastic story you have woven with this top notch rendering of a past life, Faye. Many congrats. bfn Elaine
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Date: 6/29/2014 5:27:00 PM
Faye, I am so happy to see this one a winner. Congrats.. Arlene
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Date: 6/29/2014 3:50:00 PM
Hi Faye, congratulations on this well-deserved top win! This is such a powerful write that I was easily transported aboard the Titanic on that fateful night. Pandita.
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Date: 6/29/2014 3:05:00 PM
You have made believers out of such great story-telling ! Well done, and a big congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 6/28/2014 2:02:00 PM
A nice choice for a past life tale, evocatively written.
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Date: 6/23/2014 7:17:00 AM
Got it, Faye. Thank you! Now my Soup mail isn't working. Lots of technical problems on the Soup lately.
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Date: 6/23/2014 8:47:00 AM
Yes, I have noticed.
Date: 6/23/2014 6:47:00 AM
Soup Mail, Faye
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Date: 6/23/2014 4:57:00 AM
Very well done, Faye. Very well done! I truly enjoyed this one. I love to hear a good story flow so well in a poem. Great imagery..... Robert.
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Date: 6/23/2014 4:49:00 AM
You have mastered both eerie and romantic with this one, Faye.. Love, body neath the dissolved bone of my bone!.. Hugs and good luck in the contest.. Arlene
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