Was

was strong as an ox
he was smarter than a fox….
buried in a box


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Brown Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 9:39 AM
Enjoyed reading the many diverse poems here today. I am glad to have came across your amongst these wonderful poems Robb. Wishing you a magnificent weekend. Love, Carol
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November 4, 2010 at 8:46 AM
I don't like rhyming haiku/senryu at all, because they sound like limerick? But you managed to write a senryu with meaning here, even though it is done in rhyme>>Phong
La France Avatar
November 4, 2010 at 6:55 AM
so deep and profound, I am always so amazed when a poet can write so much in a few words. ~~
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