War's Nigh

a fly buzzed by eye dry asked why I cry

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David Moore

Date: 3/29/2024 10:15:00 AM

Good buzz. Thank you for responding to my Miss Mott and Marriage post. Today, Miss Mott would be jailed, and I was speaking of a couple in the church I pastored. I did not know Bill and Hillary had reconciled. Thanks again.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/29/2024 3:16:00 PM

Interesting thoughts there, David... As for Bill and Hillary, I don't know that they ever really reconciled. But they hold hands in public now, sit together, and all that. Cheers, gw

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/29/2024 8:18:00 AM

Must be something very serious for you to cry as a fly buzzed by Gershon and asked you why. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/30/2024 9:45:00 PM

Your comment's rhyme was a pleasant use of my reading time, Jennifer. Thanks! :) Gershon

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/29/2024 5:22:00 AM

a unique but captivating Footle....I see your muse is being inspirational :-) have a splendid weekend, Sara

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/30/2024 9:46:00 PM

My footle is a-tootle, or something like that. lol. Thanks, Sara.