Hillard Sarver Poet Monorhyme

Warrior Poet Zen 1-1

Warrior Poet Zen 1-1

I think of that well-known phrase about the rose and time.
We should go beyond that simple act in our downtime.
To stop and only smell the rose may be sublime.
However, we should endeavor more than a clever rhyme.
It is our pleasure and duty to become that rose in our lifetime.

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CayCay Godwin August 6, 2016 at 8:24 AM Great mono-rhyme, Hillard - and content, too ... CayCay Hillard Sarver August 6, 2016 at 9:30 AM Thank you for reading and reviewing this poem. I did not know until just now there is a mono-rhyme category. I will change this piece to that. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Sherry Beck August 5, 2016 at 9:14 PM Perfect! Becoming the rose! Hillard Sarver August 5, 2016 at 9:25 PM Thank you for reading and reviewing this writing. I am glad you liked it.