Warning To Hikers

Please stay on path Signs we hath posted Our wrath on violators! written January 19, 2022 [modified syllable count]

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Sotto Poet

Date: 1/19/2022 6:34:00 PM

In a manner that I found appealing, you delivered the message in a way that I used in a few of my short poems. Good day, dear buddy. I hope everything in your life is going well.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/19/2022 8:11:00 PM

Doing just great as far as I can tell, Lasaad. Same to you!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/19/2022 5:56:00 PM

The path hath the wrath! ~ New Math

L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/19/2022 6:07:00 PM

Could be, gw...could be!

Bill Baker

Date: 1/19/2022 2:06:00 PM

The message here is very clear. Interesting form also, Milt. Bill

L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/19/2022 3:42:00 PM

This is called a Than-Bauk, something I'd never paid any attention to before. Don't think I will again, either!!!! LOL

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/19/2022 1:02:00 PM

Hikers get into deep trouble when they wander off the path, often needing to be rescued. I am not familiar with this form. I will have to check it out Milton. Great advice! Blessings xxoo

L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/19/2022 3:42:00 PM

Thanks, Connie. Just experimenting with the style which I found in "Types of Poems."