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Warning: Dirty Senyru

at doctor's office
Virgin magazine waits
to be fingered


12/1/11

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

December 10, 2012 at 6:19 AM

Congratulations Susan, a well deserved win love xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 9, 2012 at 3:36 PM

A well deserved win poem, congratulations. -A poem to be proud of, very well written B.E.S. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

December 9, 2012 at 2:51 PM

Black, congratulations with your awesome win..in the Skitty Skat Contest.... thank you for everything. ~Always & Forever~ PD

Skat A

December 9, 2012 at 2:25 PM

Congrats in my contest, . ~SKAT

Robert A. Dufresne

December 5, 2011 at 4:25 PM

so the corners aren't dog eared in the least.... this is funny, Susan

David Williams

December 5, 2011 at 9:53 AM

Susan ha ha ha this is great, though in our doctor's all of the virgins are well thumbed...oops...well you know what i mean.. many thanks for your kind words and yes it's true..David

Tony Lane

December 2, 2011 at 7:14 AM

I'm glad that I didn't say that. It was funny though.

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 2, 2011 at 6:45 AM

Hands Susan hand sanitizer. What a hoot you are. Great Senryu. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

December 1, 2011 at 10:29 PM

hahaha, I LOVE this, SUSAN. wow,what a great modern senryu!!! (don't capitalize virgin though since it's like a haiku that way). Is this for any contest. It's super clever.