Warmth of Rainy Day

Rain pour down so little.

Watching the fireplace burning logs.

I sip a cup of coffee in my hand.

Thinking the last day I saw your eyes.

Mesmerizing by moment that soon will pass.

I picked the picture you left in my pad.

'twas only yesterday we're so in love.

Now left the memories inside my heart.

Dancing alone with your shadow,

I know you're here yet so far.

Embracing you tight in my arms.

I opened my eyes and sees the light.

The rain stop falling that night.

The flame of  love warmth me high.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/15/2017 6:05:00 AM
...poignant and lovely aiyah :-) ...words of love etched on one's heart forever. many blessings to you :-) lynn ps. hope your corner of the world is happy and peaceful :-)
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Date: 11/17/2015 12:24:00 AM
love can last forever. I like the feeling of your poem.
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Date: 10/23/2014 12:10:00 AM
Hello, my dear friend Aiyah! Remembering you today. I'm so sorry if I just dropped by now. Just got a short break lately and due today; however, I'm more rested now. So, I'm having quite time at soup. How are you my very dear friend? hope you're doin well. It's been a long time. Hope to hear from you soon. I like your poem so much. It's a very sweet heartfelt write. Thanks a lot! Many hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 10/10/2014 10:31:00 PM
so romantic. I really like this one from you. Where have you been? And where is a new poem? Let's see one soon!!!
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Date: 10/10/2014 3:55:00 PM
- Nice to see you dear friend Aiyah :) - I wish you a happy weekend !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/29/2014 3:37:00 PM
So romantic and sad.
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Date: 9/23/2014 3:39:00 PM
Rain cannot put out the flame of love which burns passionately inside of you! Very enjoyable read, Aiyah. /x/ paul
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Date: 9/16/2014 3:59:00 PM
my, you romance the night with rain's ambrosial trance, ria... very well done!... huggs
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Date: 9/16/2014 3:26:00 PM
Ahhh you should call it Shadow Dancing!! very cool verse. write, write, write Light & Love
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Date: 9/15/2014 9:45:00 PM
Beautiful! Loved this one Aiyah !!
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Date: 9/15/2014 9:14:00 PM
aww hugs. Enjoyed your poem my friend )
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Date: 9/15/2014 2:44:00 PM
I like your heartfelt lines -JT
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Date: 9/15/2014 2:17:00 PM
beautiful moving write Aiyah with wonderful imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/15/2014 12:02:00 PM
- Love's power is so much greater than ourselves - When we look through the glasses of love ...... will copper be to gold - Enjoy reading your moving poem - always nice to see you my friend AiyaH !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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