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Oh, the story of my mind If I am silent I can hear the stars just to catch his twinkle a little of his flicker a lifetime of tyranny and hardship and freedom then another iteration of the same cycle when I'm in winter you have the spring will you whisper to me of its warmth? that warmth.
Written: January 13, 2023

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Date: 1/13/2023 9:56:00 AM
The evocation of the totality of human consciousness is perfectly expressed in such a vividly painted scenario in this beautiful poem of yours, Lasaad! Food for the soul...ab
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Date: 1/13/2023 9:40:00 AM
Oh I love this and the ending too. A Fave :)
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