Warmth Fluttered

uttered fluttered flame still ignited 
    as summer stuttered steps faded;  
      held my anguished face, 
        muttered and laid a breath kiss. 

9/16/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 10:53 AM
very nicely done. I am kind of befuddled by the challenge. Maybe I need to just try a short cute poem like this one.
Deepa Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 12:16 PM
Such a simple muse with touching lines.. Loved the imagery dear Eve mam:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.Much love:-)
Buhagiar Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 10:51 PM
There's warmth enough in this poem. ~~
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