Warmth by Mrs Yolanda Joy Nicholsen

gazing beyond
the chartered places
that dazzles my mind 
beneath the braising 
wonders of self
the mere wonders
of me arose under 
the infamous sun

Written by Yolanda Joy Nicholsen 
December 23rd 2003 
Finally submitted here 5/3/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Callus Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 6:21 AM
I usually like to visit a poet's first post on Soup, Yolanda, and this offering of yours was a good one to start off with. ~ [I see you joined Soup 3 yrs before I did!] I must read more of your work. ~ Regards // paul
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July 28, 2024 at 12:28 PM
Thank you for your kindness I wrote this piece December 23 2003 after my traumatic brain injury warmth from my Afghan amazing I finally submitted it December 23 2003 after my traumatic brain injury
Ince Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 2:22 PM
I liked this. Great job.(:
Nicholsen Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 4:36 AM
sending hugs
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