Warmth

Warmth A kettle whistles in the kitchen. Sun warmed snowflakes pond on the surface of a frozen lake. ©2/10/2018 submitted to – Kettle, pond, Lake – Poetry Contest sponsor – Nayda Ivette Negron

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Sneha Rv

Date: 2/10/2018 10:21:00 AM

What a great poem in three lines, such a nice sight :) (I think the sponsor had mentioned to use all three words in your poem..) Hope this does well in the contest!

John Lawless
Date: 2/10/2018 3:25:00 PM

YIKES.....on second read....nice catch. Have made a subtle change. Again...a big thank you.

John Lawless
Date: 2/10/2018 3:22:00 PM

I think I got the three words in. Thanks for reading and commenting, it is always nice to hear from you.