Warmth

My numb lips shivering in autumn snow near candles of dusk rub moist warmth of memories naming you May 25, 2020 BRIAN'S CHOICE Y,any form,any theme poetry Contest Winner: First Place

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Lonna Blodgett

Date: 10/5/2020 10:58:00 AM

Aditi, don't know how I missed this!! It is quite succinctly the epitome of poetic skill. How beautiful!

Edward Ibeh

Date: 5/28/2020 6:46:00 PM

Phenomenally succinct! Congratulations on your well-deserved first placement, Aditi:-)

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/29/2020 6:06:00 AM

Thanks for such a generous gesture of appreciation Edward! :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/28/2020 5:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win Aditi. I really like the way you started your poem with "me" and ended it with "you." Very nice transition of focus.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/29/2020 6:06:00 AM

Glad you loved it Sam. Thank you for your keen observation and your kind words of appreciation! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/28/2020 4:06:00 PM

Yet another splendid win for you, Aditi--congrats on your first place in Brian's contest.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/29/2020 6:05:00 AM

Thank you for your uplifting words Vijay :)

John Watt

Date: 5/28/2020 2:11:00 PM

Congratulations for your #1 win today with this gem of a poem, Aditi!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/29/2020 6:05:00 AM

Thank you for your generous wishes John :)

John Watt

Date: 5/25/2020 10:33:00 PM

"moist warmth of memories" is so poetic, Aditi. You have filled a small cup with a bounty of meaning. Excellent job, I wish you all the best in this contest, and with your continued pursuit of delightful writing. God bless you ~ John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/26/2020 9:30:00 AM

Glad you loved it John. I always feel encouraged and glad by your words. Thank you for your kind wishes dear friend. God bless you :)