Warmth


My

numb lips

shivering

in autumn snow

near candles of dusk

rub moist warmth of 

memories

naming

you


May 25, 2020
BRIAN'S CHOICE Y,any form,any theme poetry Contest
Winner: First Place

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Lonna Blodgett

October 5, 2020 at 10:58 AM

Aditi, don't know how I missed this!! It is quite succinctly the epitome of poetic skill. How beautiful!

Edward Ibeh

May 28, 2020 at 6:46 PM

Phenomenally succinct! Congratulations on your well-deserved first placement, Aditi:-)

Aditi Mishra

May 29, 2020 at 6:06 AM

Thanks for such a generous gesture of appreciation Edward! :)

Sam Kauffman

May 28, 2020 at 5:48 PM

Congratulations on your top win Aditi. I really like the way you started your poem with "me" and ended it with "you." Very nice transition of focus.

Aditi Mishra

May 29, 2020 at 6:06 AM

Glad you loved it Sam. Thank you for your keen observation and your kind words of appreciation! :)

Vijay Pandit

May 28, 2020 at 4:06 PM

Yet another splendid win for you, Aditi--congrats on your first place in Brian's contest.

Aditi Mishra

May 29, 2020 at 6:05 AM

Thank you for your uplifting words Vijay :)

John Watt

May 28, 2020 at 2:11 PM

Congratulations for your #1 win today with this gem of a poem, Aditi!

Aditi Mishra

May 29, 2020 at 6:05 AM

Thank you for your generous wishes John :)

John Watt

May 25, 2020 at 10:33 PM

"moist warmth of memories" is so poetic, Aditi. You have filled a small cup with a bounty of meaning. Excellent job, I wish you all the best in this contest, and with your continued pursuit of delightful writing. God bless you ~ John

Aditi Mishra

May 26, 2020 at 9:30 AM

Glad you loved it John. I always feel encouraged and glad by your words. Thank you for your kind wishes dear friend. God bless you :)

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