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My numb lips shivering in autumn snow near candles of dusk rub moist warmth of memories naming you May 25, 2020 BRIAN'S CHOICE Y,any form,any theme poetry Contest Winner: First Place

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Date: 5/28/2020 6:46:00 PM
Phenomenally succinct! Congratulations on your well-deserved first placement, Aditi:-)
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Date: 5/29/2020 6:06:00 AM
Thanks for such a generous gesture of appreciation Edward! :)
Date: 5/28/2020 5:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win Aditi. I really like the way you started your poem with "me" and ended it with "you." Very nice transition of focus.
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Date: 5/29/2020 6:06:00 AM
Glad you loved it Sam. Thank you for your keen observation and your kind words of appreciation! :)
Date: 5/28/2020 4:06:00 PM
Yet another splendid win for you, Aditi--congrats on your first place in Brian's contest.
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Date: 5/29/2020 6:05:00 AM
Thank you for your uplifting words Vijay :)
Date: 5/28/2020 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations for your #1 win today with this gem of a poem, Aditi!
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Date: 5/29/2020 6:05:00 AM
Thank you for your generous wishes John :)
Date: 5/26/2020 11:45:00 AM
Awesome poem. You write with such depth and you pull in the reader's soul. Chantelle hugs
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Date: 5/26/2020 11:46:00 AM
Thank you for encouraging my efforts Chantelle. Much love :)
Date: 5/25/2020 10:33:00 PM
"moist warmth of memories" is so poetic, Aditi. You have filled a small cup with a bounty of meaning. Excellent job, I wish you all the best in this contest, and with your continued pursuit of delightful writing. God bless you ~ John
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Date: 5/26/2020 9:30:00 AM
Glad you loved it John. I always feel encouraged and glad by your words. Thank you for your kind wishes dear friend. God bless you :)
Date: 5/25/2020 7:30:00 AM
This is very nice, it should do well in the contest - stay safe Baron
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Date: 5/25/2020 2:48:00 PM
Thankful for your kind wishes Baron. God bless you :)