Warmth

Cozy and warm Then cut and torn Just like that, I'm cold and broken And from hopeful dreams I'm awoken I always repeat my mistakes How much more can this heart take? Just show me some light I'm losing this fight I want to feel whole I want to feel warmth within my soul

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Debra Mundine

Date: 4/12/2018 8:14:00 AM

This is a nice heartfelt reading. I can see you have much potential for rhyme and rhythm. Keep up the words.

Emma Barnard
Date: 4/12/2018 11:37:00 PM

Thank you !

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/6/2018 3:07:00 AM

An excellent first posting for PoetrySoup. Welcome aboard! You have created a wonderful couplet, Emma.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/10/2018 12:26:00 AM

I have to add one little thing I had not added before. We ALL want to feel warmth within our souls, and you said it first, but we all FEEL it! YOU are such a great feel-writer, Emma. Hooray for you Baby. Hooray for YOU!

Emma Barnard
Date: 4/6/2018 5:05:00 PM

Thank you so much!