Emma Barnard Poet Couplet

Warmth

Cozy and warm
Then cut and torn

Just like that, I'm cold and broken
And from hopeful dreams I'm awoken

I always repeat my mistakes
How much more can this heart take?

Just show me some light
I'm losing this fight

I want to feel whole
I want to feel warmth within my soul

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Debra Mundine April 12, 2018 at 8:14 AM This is a nice heartfelt reading. I can see you have much potential for rhyme and rhythm. Keep up the words. Emma Barnard April 12, 2018 at 11:37 PM Thank you !

Caren Krutsinger April 6, 2018 at 3:07 AM An excellent first posting for PoetrySoup. Welcome aboard! You have created a wonderful couplet, Emma. Caren Krutsinger April 10, 2018 at 12:26 AM I have to add one little thing I had not added before. We ALL want to feel warmth within our souls, and you said it first, but we all FEEL it! YOU are such a great feel-writer, Emma. Hooray for you Baby. Hooray for YOU! Emma Barnard April 6, 2018 at 5:05 PM Thank you so much!