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Warmly Loving

Beautiful dazzling sunshine jewels diamond shining each vision wrapped softly Warmly glowing in the dark heavens entering private chambers a ball Flickering lights dance as a moon smiles pink The strawberry clouds blushing glorious smiling full with grace rose petals touching deeply darling your inner beauty Alone singing inside this world one dream kissing warm ocean waves hangs a picture Behind the structure of your face mirror this perfect smiling soul kissing these eyes in a thousand and one celebrations falling golden waves melting spices heart burning passions salts eats into feelings blending honey devouring desire claws grip touching cotton softness embraces true

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/5/2015 5:11:00 PM
the imagery in the second stanza is pure gold love it love it !
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/20/2015 4:43:00 PM
renee thank you kindly for the very beautiful comment bless you
Date: 1/5/2015 3:14:00 PM
Liam I love your choice of vocabulary..WoW so beautiful these descriptions dear friend!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/20/2015 4:41:00 PM
thank you ever so kindly for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 1/5/2015 2:36:00 PM
-the strawberry clouds blushing glorious- I love the way you can string together images unique and impressive
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/20/2015 4:40:00 PM
i try casarah to come up with different ways of coloring using nature as the picture wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated
Date: 1/5/2015 2:24:00 PM
Straight rom the heart....excellent liam
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/20/2015 4:37:00 PM
as deep from the heart as one can paint tim wonderful comment pal deeply appreciated
Date: 1/5/2015 2:00:00 PM
- Romantic and beautiful poem, dear Liam - A big 7 for you !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/20/2015 4:34:00 PM
anne lise thank you for the wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated
Date: 1/5/2015 1:59:00 PM
Hi Liam ! What a romantic and very beautiful poem you've written here my dearest friend. A solid 7 +++ for you ! A very dazzling most wonderful poem to be held so very close to ones heart.Smiling. I really enjoyed! I love it! Golden pen! Wishing you all the best in 2015 ! And I do pray that all your dreams and hopes come for you true this new year! Have a very lovely weekend!. smiling. God bless you and be with you always! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxo D."
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/20/2015 4:32:00 PM
thank you dorian for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend

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