Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Warmly Loving

Beautiful dazzling sunshine jewels 
diamond shining each vision wrapped softly 
Warmly glowing in the dark heavens 
entering private chambers a ball

Flickering lights dance as a moon smiles pink 
The strawberry clouds blushing glorious 
smiling full with grace rose petals
touching deeply darling your inner beauty
 
Alone singing inside this world one dream
kissing warm ocean waves hangs a picture
Behind the structure of your face 
mirror this perfect smiling soul

kissing these eyes in a thousand and one celebrations 
falling golden waves melting spices heart burning
passions salts eats into feelings blending honey devouring desire 
claws grip touching cotton softness embraces true

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Renee Muravez January 5, 2015 at 5:11 PM the imagery in the second stanza is pure gold love it love it ! Liam Mcdaid January 20, 2015 at 4:43 PM renee thank you kindly for the very beautiful comment bless you

Cupids Arrow January 5, 2015 at 3:14 PM Liam I love your choice of vocabulary..WoW so beautiful these descriptions dear friend! Liam Mcdaid January 20, 2015 at 4:41 PM thank you ever so kindly for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated

Casarah Nance January 5, 2015 at 2:36 PM -the strawberry clouds blushing glorious- I love the way you can string together images unique and impressive Liam Mcdaid January 20, 2015 at 4:40 PM i try casarah to come up with different ways of coloring using nature as the picture wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

Tim Smith January 5, 2015 at 2:24 PM Straight rom the heart....excellent liam Liam Mcdaid January 20, 2015 at 4:37 PM as deep from the heart as one can paint tim wonderful comment pal deeply appreciated

Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2015 at 2:00 PM - Romantic and beautiful poem, dear Liam - A big 7 for you !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid January 20, 2015 at 4:34 PM anne lise thank you for the wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

Dorian Petersen Potter January 5, 2015 at 1:59 PM Hi Liam ! What a romantic and very beautiful poem you've written here my dearest friend. A solid 7 +++ for you ! A very dazzling most wonderful poem to be held so very close to ones heart.Smiling. I really enjoyed! I love it! Golden pen! Wishing you all the best in 2015 ! And I do pray that all your dreams and hopes come for you true this new year! Have a very lovely weekend!. smiling. God bless you and be with you always! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxo D." Liam Mcdaid January 20, 2015 at 4:32 PM thank you dorian for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend