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Warmin' Up

Swingin' it in sunshine almost barefoot skippin' o'er the grassy courtyard breathin' freedom. Smiles you flash eventually catch attention to unmentionables. Air quivers skin slithers through broad shoulders dark flanked supremely. Wave and wave back.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/24/2011 3:33:00 PM
It's the heat that makes the air quiver; I sense some of that throughout the verse. Nice! :)
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Date: 10/23/2011 1:28:00 PM
LOVE your refreshing free style, Nancy. I was smiling all the way through (chuckled at the "unmentionables"). Sharp and sassy words from a fun lassie. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/23/2011 6:49:00 AM
A lovely write, nice to be reading you again...Michael
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Date: 10/23/2011 5:11:00 AM
And then?
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