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Warm Water Flows

her body nude and wet glistening water down her back a smile follows a hint her flesh a beautiful brown tint a scream a moan in the shower she stands alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/8/2011 7:09:00 PM
Wow, this can have different interpretations. Could be like the shower scence in Phycho? I really like it. A belated congrats on your win with this one.
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Date: 6/29/2011 5:43:00 PM
wow what a cool wrap up! Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/29/2011 4:31:00 AM
Congratulations Bias on your win in the contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 3:25:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 6/27/2011 10:03:00 PM
Leaaves so much to each readers imagination. sensational writing. Many congrats on your FIRST PLACE WIN. Lainie
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Date: 6/14/2011 5:56:00 PM
B.fields, oooo that is all i am going to say... cause some shower heads are to expensive,,, and give hot water full force..ouch!... i'd be yelling to... enjoyed,..linda
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Date: 6/14/2011 10:48:00 AM
B.fields, concise dreams had me forgetting the bathroom. ;-)
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Date: 6/13/2011 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Bias. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2011 10:14:00 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, bias
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