Warm Water Flows

her body nude and wet 
glistening water down her back 
a smile follows a hint 
her flesh a beautiful brown tint
a scream
a moan 
in the shower she stands alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 7:09 PM
Wow, this can have different interpretations. Could be like the shower scence in Phycho? I really like it. A belated congrats on your win with this one.
Guzzi Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 5:43 PM
wow what a cool wrap up! Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 4:31 AM
Congratulations Bias on your win in the contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 3:25 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
George   Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 10:03 PM
Leaaves so much to each readers imagination. sensational writing. Many congrats on your FIRST PLACE WIN. Lainie
A   Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 5:56 PM
B.fields, oooo that is all i am going to say... cause some shower heads are to expensive,,, and give hot water full force..ouch!... i'd be yelling to... enjoyed,..linda
Guy Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 10:48 AM
B.fields, concise dreams had me forgetting the bathroom. ;-)
Brown Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 10:47 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Bias. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 10:14 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, bias
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