Mario De Paz Poet Prose Poetry

Warm Thrill, Brief Unforgettable Moment, Mario De Paz 11,19,2013

That field of wheat
Gilded by sun
Cherished by wind
Tender received
Our bodies
Quivering.
A warm thrill
Down in my back,
In my bones,
While embracing her
In the field of wheat.
A warm thrill
Is now quivering
Down in my back
In my bones,
Thinking
To that field of wheat

italian version:
Brivido caldo

Quel campo di grano
Dorato dal sole
Accarezzato dal vento
Morbido accolse 
I nostri corpi 
Frementi.
Un brivido caldo
Scese nella mia schiena,
Nelle mie ossa,
Mentre lei abbracciavo
Nel campo di grano.
Un brivido caldo
Sta ora scendendo 
Fremente
Nella mia schiena
Nelle mie ossa,
Pensando 
A quel campo di grano

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Karen Anglesey November 30, 2013 at 8:41 PM Unforgettable indeed! Well crafted with lovely imagery :) Mario De Paz December 1, 2013 at 5:41 AM Thank you, Karen, for visiting and for positive comment

Donna Jones November 29, 2013 at 10:29 PM That is an unforgettable moment...congratulations on your win.. Mario De Paz November 30, 2013 at 10:02 AM Yes, it was indeed. Thanks,

Anne-Lise Andresen November 29, 2013 at 12:12 PM - Congratulations on your winning poem in: - BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT / / Nette Onclaud contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 21, 2013 at 6:37 AM to be in a moment like this is simply divine, mario... if for me, kindly add name, contest title and date of poem.. :) huggs

Harry Horsman September 25, 2013 at 9:54 AM love your poem Mario, and yes the Italian version, without understanding, comes across some how, very powerful... Mario De Paz September 26, 2013 at 7:03 AM Thank you for commenting so positively. Sometimes my memories help to write a poem where there is something of myself inside....

Anne-Lise Andresen September 19, 2013 at 9:10 AM A beautiful poem Mario - I wish I could read it in Italian - Italian sounds so romantic. - All the best to you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Mario De Paz September 19, 2013 at 9:25 AM Thank you Anne Lise. Sometimes I feel romantic and then I write what is passing in my brain