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Warm Hug

a warm hug covers

       pours like honey so gently

                       and spreads like butter

lovesenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

January 22, 2011 at 3:06 PM

this senryu is wonderful. So did you see The Rabbit Hole too??

Caryl Muzzey

January 22, 2011 at 1:41 PM

A wonderful Senryu. Every word a masterpiece, full of great images. I enjoyed the read. Thank you for your wonderfully kind comments on mine. Caryl

Nette Onclaud

January 22, 2011 at 9:33 AM

i feel the warm feel of this, michael... astounding senryu... thanks for appreciating my entry in your contest.. so touched! :) hugggs, nette

Wilma Neels

January 22, 2011 at 8:40 AM

a lovely way to share warmth and love, who would say not to a warm hug.. beautiful descriptive senryu Michael, I love it, we should certainly do it again soon, let me know when you come up with an idea k ;) love Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

January 22, 2011 at 6:33 AM

A warm hug.. now i feel like a waffle all of a sudden.. A good senryu, Michael i love the sweetness of a hug as well. You sure are the warm honey of my moring... thanks for the #1 in your "spicy" contest.. Honestly it was the first thing I did after avoiding all new years cheers.. it was a sad one for me.. but so far so good.. my year has been more than i expect.. Loving life like a warm hug.. that melts like the best spread ever.. have a nice one,..p.d,

Sara Kendrick

January 22, 2011 at 5:43 AM

Very descriptive of a lover's embrace...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 21, 2011 at 7:58 PM

Yummy .. sure sounds like a deep romantic truffle of luv Michael... lovely and lyrical with wonderful visuals ... thankxx for the S.M. luv.. Jersey Girl shivers and shakes..in sub zero temps.. bbbrrrr...