Dineen Williams Gault Poet Rhyme

Warm Fuzzies

Warm fuzzies
and butterflies
Blushing smiles
and starry eyes
 
Emotional reactions
that may seem overblown
From a fairy tale land far, far away, 
far beyond the grasp of those who are fully grown
 
But for those of us who are compelled
to sigh and swoon
at the sight of two lovers, holding hands
and strolling by the light of the moon
This...is for you
 
This is for...the romantics
Those who like to take their time
For him, who knows she'll get lost in the rhythm of his heartbeat
And she's assured that for her...there's no mountain he won't climb
 
These words are meant to remind the lady that
his lips do indeed taste like honey
And the gentleman will recall, that her smile
can make even the stormiest of days, appear sunny
 
These verses represent..
A picnic for two atop a grassy, secluded hill
feeding each other strawberries until
they both have eaten way past their fill.
An exchange of odes and sonnets written from his and her quill
Even after the last page is shared, candied thoughts linger, still
Thus sparking a poetry slam for two, reciting heart shaped rhymes at will

Some still gleefully agree 
that even in the day and age that this is
a luscious... lingering,,, kiss is...
a soft...soothing... bliss is...
 
Warm fuzzies
and butterflies
Blushing smiles
and starry eyes...




1/28/16

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Vladislav Raven April 3, 2016 at 7:33 PM Hi Dineen, i did enjoy your first poem, as i did read i felt the peace enter me. I did feel a joy i ever wish to feel. Being of a romantic nature myself this write did sing. It does give, peace, joy and most assuredly warm fuzzies. For the write itself and also the feelings it did give, this write does deserve a seven rating and i place it in my faves....Mike. Dineen Williams Gault April 4, 2016 at 6:28 PM I appreciate you saying that this piece/peace did indeed give the feeling of warm fuzzies. Your kind compliments are appreciated as well, thank you much!

Tom Quigley March 16, 2016 at 2:36 PM Great poem! "Grown up" in that sense is so unnecessary! Dineen Williams Gault March 19, 2016 at 4:58 AM Thank you very much Tom. Yes, in that sense let that inner child shine.

Andrea Dietrich March 15, 2016 at 3:24 PM what a wonderful first poem you posted at Soup. I really enjoyed seeing this one today, Dineen Dineen Williams Gault March 19, 2016 at 4:55 AM Thank you for that, Andrea. Your support is so appreciated!

Poet Destroyer A February 16, 2016 at 10:18 PM Hi Dineen, I hope you are well. LINDA Dineen Williams Gault February 21, 2016 at 9:56 AM Hi Linda, sweet of you to ask. Just been busy. I hope all is well with you also. :)

Joseph May January 30, 2016 at 7:51 PM Beautifully romantic Dineen...Well written... A 7..Welcome to Poetry Soup! Dineen Williams Gault January 31, 2016 at 5:38 AM Thank you very much for letting me know you think so, Joseph. I appreciate the welcome!

Skat A January 29, 2016 at 6:08 PM Dineen, warm fuzzies and butterflies. Fascinating imagery, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Skat A January 30, 2016 at 1:57 AM ha, then we are going to be great poetic friends. SKAT Dineen Williams Gault January 29, 2016 at 6:22 PM Well Skat, I am pleased to meet you. It's wonderful that you found the imagery fascinating, and I am looking forward to reading your work. Thank you much for such an upbeat response, my newest poetry soup friend. I can be a bit quiet at first, but then look out! :)

Dorian Petersen Potter January 29, 2016 at 2:07 PM Excellent pen Deen! Well done! A 7! And welcome to the Soup!:)) Ah and thank you so kindly for your visit to my page! Looking forward to reading more of your work here.Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you always!:) D Dineen Williams Gault January 29, 2016 at 6:34 PM I appreciate your kind words very much, as well as the welcome Dorian. It was my pleasure to visit your page. You have a lovely weekend as well, and God bless!

Poet Destroyer A January 29, 2016 at 11:42 AM Coming back here, Dineen. It would be nice to read another delight like this one. I like the entry and ending, and flow. You also have a great rhyming beat, I am aromatic and enjoyed this even more the second time. Hugs. LINDA Poet Destroyer A January 29, 2016 at 6:05 PM Of, course Dineen, I'm especially looking forward in coming back to find a new poem. Your newest friend with a pen. Linda Dineen Williams Gault January 29, 2016 at 6:03 PM Gee Linda, you let this steep, came back and enjoyed it even more. Thank you so much for such a positive, detailed critique. I will look into the vault for another one.

Poet Destroyer A January 28, 2016 at 7:27 PM Dineen WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Dineen Williams Gault January 29, 2016 at 11:09 AM Thank you for such a warm welcome Linda. I feel lucky to have found this group. Hopefully I'll do a better job at editing my poetry before posting next time, :p. And I will appreciate every piece enjoyed. Many talented writers here, thanks again my new poetic friend. :)