Warm Day Hours Grow

. Warm daylight hours Sun's rays mightly strenghten Living waters flow Inspired by John Freeman's Nature Picture

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James Fraser

Date: 8/8/2011 8:42:00 AM

Lovely Haiku Sara, nothing better than a warm day growing, nice one :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/19/2011 4:33:00 AM

enjoyed reading today....how are you and your not so empty nest?? hehe

Kash Poet

Date: 7/17/2011 3:26:00 AM

Very nice take on the contest photo Sara..best wishes.

Don Johnson

Date: 7/16/2011 4:12:00 PM

Oh deer how, sad its queer, i betta change me undies, hermaphradites in hevvin here, i'll be gone by monday:) yes poor little dogs, probbys like humans :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2011 3:18:00 PM

AWesome, Sara. You did very well with that inspiring picture.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/16/2011 3:15:00 PM

very lovely Sara.. hope u will have much success with this beautiful piece my friend.. inspiring as your comments luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/16/2011 1:46:00 PM

Nice reading of the picture with this nature theme, sara

John Freeman

Date: 7/16/2011 11:31:00 AM

Great job on this one Sara. Agape, Moses