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Warm Breezes

Warm breezes of the day,

taking me to heights beyond

my imagination.

cloudless sky caressing

my thoughts as I sit

under a shady oak tree,

dreaming dreams of

better days.

Birds making music for my

enjoyment.

Warmer days are in store,

as summer is stopping by

to say hello, I'm back

so enjoy.

Written 6-7-11

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Judy Ball Date: 6/23/2011 10:07:00 PM Very nicely done indeed. Great imagery as I see you lounging beneath a tree enjoying the warm breezes of Summer. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 6/17/2011 1:19:00 PM Thank heaven for summer after last winter. I enjoyed your enjoyment. LOve, daver Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 6/17/2011 12:03:00 PM Beautiful imagery, my friend. We've had hail, rain and gales here today, LOL. Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 6/16/2011 12:39:00 PM Almost had me floating on that breeze, James (a most enjoyable piece) Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 6/16/2011 12:35:00 PM this was very creative and had a great flow.. loved it! cory Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/16/2011 10:06:00 AM Enjoyed your creative work this afternoon..I hope that you get the best out of summer without the undue punishment of the heat...I live in West Central Georgia..If the Robins are here later than early spring, I am not aware of their presence..It could be that they are nesting and don't come out when I am out there..I believe that they are just migratory through here in the spring going to where they breed and nest in the summer.I looked up some information about them but still questions.Sara Login to Reply

Jeff Morehead Date: 6/16/2011 7:13:00 AM Summer is dtopping back to say hello > great line....I loved the whole thing. Jeff Login to Reply

Iolanda Scripca Date: 6/15/2011 10:44:00 PM If only all and every day were like the one in your poem...!!! Love it! Login to Reply

Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 6/15/2011 9:23:00 PM ... and I do, enjoy that is. Very nice write about summertime. There is definitely joy in the air here. Thanks for sharing. Caroline. Login to Reply

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 6/15/2011 8:06:00 PM i can't think of anything wrong with this scene my friend... Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 6/15/2011 5:24:00 PM A beautiful write dear poet ! I enjoyed this very much ! Have a great week sir ! much love, james Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 6/15/2011 2:31:00 PM James it is raining in Cape Town, you are making me long for those warm breezes.. Really enjoyed this write tonight ;) thank you for your kind comments always ;) Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 6/15/2011 2:19:00 PM Sounds like my day you have painted so nicely in this write... enjoyed... Michael Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/15/2011 2:05:00 PM Ah, James, if I lived in the North this would be just how I felt about the approach of summer. Still, it's spring and was 99 degrees where I live today. Truly a lovely write though -- I'm just dreading summer temperatures in Florida. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply