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Warm Breezes

Warm breezes of the day, taking me to heights beyond my imagination. cloudless sky caressing my thoughts as I sit under a shady oak tree, dreaming dreams of better days. Birds making music for my enjoyment. Warmer days are in store, as summer is stopping by to say hello, I'm back so enjoy. Written 6-7-11

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Judy Ball

Date: 6/23/2011 10:07:00 PM

Very nicely done indeed. Great imagery as I see you lounging beneath a tree enjoying the warm breezes of Summer. God Bless, JB

Daver Austin

Date: 6/17/2011 1:19:00 PM

Thank heaven for summer after last winter. I enjoyed your enjoyment. LOve, daver

Jack Horne

Date: 6/17/2011 12:03:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, my friend. We've had hail, rain and gales here today, LOL.

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/16/2011 12:39:00 PM

Almost had me floating on that breeze, James (a most enjoyable piece)

Cory Long

Date: 6/16/2011 12:35:00 PM

this was very creative and had a great flow.. loved it! cory

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/16/2011 10:06:00 AM

Enjoyed your creative work this afternoon..I hope that you get the best out of summer without the undue punishment of the heat...I live in West Central Georgia..If the Robins are here later than early spring, I am not aware of their presence..It could be that they are nesting and don't come out when I am out there..I believe that they are just migratory through here in the spring going to where they breed and nest in the summer.I looked up some information about them but still questions.Sara

Jeff Morehead

Date: 6/16/2011 7:13:00 AM

Summer is dtopping back to say hello > great line....I loved the whole thing. Jeff

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 6/15/2011 10:44:00 PM

If only all and every day were like the one in your poem...!!! Love it!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 6/15/2011 9:23:00 PM

... and I do, enjoy that is. Very nice write about summertime. There is definitely joy in the air here. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 6/15/2011 8:06:00 PM

i can't think of anything wrong with this scene my friend...

James Peranteau

Date: 6/15/2011 5:24:00 PM

A beautiful write dear poet ! I enjoyed this very much ! Have a great week sir ! much love, james

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/15/2011 2:31:00 PM

James it is raining in Cape Town, you are making me long for those warm breezes.. Really enjoyed this write tonight ;) thank you for your kind comments always ;)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/15/2011 2:19:00 PM

Sounds like my day you have painted so nicely in this write... enjoyed... Michael

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/15/2011 2:05:00 PM

Ah, James, if I lived in the North this would be just how I felt about the approach of summer. Still, it's spring and was 99 degrees where I live today. Truly a lovely write though -- I'm just dreading summer temperatures in Florida. Love, Carolyn