Warm Breath of Summer

warm breath of summer
golden blossoms take to wing
fireflies flit in fields

on seasonal breeze
cicadas chorus in song
ice tea on porch swing



6/25/2020
Summer Haiku Poetry
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Staton Avatar
March 1, 2022 at 10:35 PM
Wonderful imagery.
Jones Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 1:34 AM
Lovely haiku.
Logan Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Hi Karen. Thanks so much for reaching back to read this older post. I really appreciate that!
Troyer Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 5:41 PM
Something wonderful about haikus and summer! Thanks for sharing!
Logan Avatar
August 14, 2020 at 12:26 PM
Hi Jeff, Thanks for reading and leaving such kind comments.
Thompson Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 9:18 PM
Very pretty piece. Nice imagery of summer. Hope you have a great weekend. Take care, jess
Logan Avatar
August 14, 2020 at 12:26 PM
Thanks, Jess. Sorry for seeing this a week late, but I hope this weekend is a great one for you.
Tor Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 11:19 PM
Your summer Haiku comes alive with beautiful imagery penned by you. Congratulation on making the best new poems list...
Logan Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 9:18 AM
With thanks, Michael. I'm grateful for your comments.
Michael Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 8:16 AM
Imagery and senses...Congratulation Jenna Logan on POTD...Well done
Logan Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 10:53 AM
Thank you for your thoughts, Arturo.
Mishra Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 3:14 PM
Your haiku has such unique combinations Jenna! Golden blossoms and fireflies, cicadus chorus..brilliant. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love. Keep writing and inspiring :)
Logan Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 8:15 AM
Thank you for the kindness of your remarks, Aditi.
Makama Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 3:09 PM
A great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. This is well deserved.
Logan Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 8:12 AM
Thank you, Funom.
Watt Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 3:02 PM
Hi Jenna. Back again to offer my congrats on your win in the summer haiku contest, I enjoyed your imagery and alliteration ~ John
Logan Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 8:12 AM
Hi John, You're always welcome to return. Thank you for your kind thoughts.
Mcgee Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 9:39 AM
Lovely images...it brought back memories of seeing these things that I haven't thought of in ages. Congrats on your top placement Jenna.
Logan Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 8:11 AM
Thank you, Jeanne. I'm glad to hear it touched your memories.
Pandit Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 6:19 AM
Congrats Jenna on your podium win--superb imagery.
Logan Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 9:10 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay.
Cunningham Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 2:38 AM
Back with congrats Jenna, I knew it would do well. Also number 2 on the best new poets list. Youre a rising star and soups lucky to have you. Tom
Logan Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 10:12 AM
There's a list for so many things here. I'm still looking around. Thank you, Tom.
Logan Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 9:09 AM
Your words left me smiling, Tom. Thanks so very very much for your kindness.
Somadas Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 2:11 AM
fireflies flit in fields.. Lovely imagery and wonderful alliteration.. Congratulations on your win Jenna..
Logan Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 9:09 AM
So kind of you to read and leave your comments. Thank you, Jenish.
Mohn Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 10:29 PM
wonderful mood created here Jenna :)
Logan Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 9:08 AM
Thank you very much, David.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 8:23 PM
A lovely rendering, dearest Jenna, visually entertaining, my compliments indeed -- Aloha~@wk
Logan Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 9:07 AM
Your compliments are most encouraging. Thank you, William.
Allison Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 6:36 PM
I love your poem so much am adding it to my faves, many congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 7:53 PM
Oh, thank you so much, Jan.
Brul Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 5:31 PM
oh, this is delightful! Congrats!
Logan Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 7:52 PM
With sincere thanks!
Roper Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 4:50 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jenna. Hugs Eve
Logan Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 7:52 PM
Thank you very much, Eve.
Kitchin Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 3:54 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet and descriptive haiku!
Logan Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 7:51 PM
Tania, thank you for considering my Haiku.
Canerdy Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 5:46 PM
I'm back to say CONGRATS on receiving POTD. Janice
Logan Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 8:01 PM
I'm pleased by your return, Janice. Thanks.
Braun Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 3:42 PM
Congratulations! Very nice!
Logan Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 4:51 PM
Thank you, Martin.
Nicole Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 2:44 PM
There is something magical about butterflies fluttering in the delicate breeze- of Summer. Your thoughts bring a smile. : ) I am floating in the wind. Congratulations Jenna, on Poem of the Day. Welcome to Poetry Soup. :) Brandy
Logan Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 4:51 PM
Hi Brandy. Butterflies are magical and so are fireflies. I feel as though I'm attending a welcoming party. :) Thank you.
Gondolf Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 1:49 PM
Back to wish you congrats on POTD, Jenna, your beautiful haiku is truly deserving. John
Logan Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 4:49 PM
You're welcome anytime, John. Thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 11:10 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful day in your poem. I can feel the breeze on your swing as I drink my ice tea. Enjoy your win and day...........
Logan Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 4:48 PM
Hi Paula. Thank you and you can share a glass with me.
Watt Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 10:47 AM
Lovely summer imagery, Jenna. Best wishes in the haiku contest and congrats on your POTD selection ~ John
Logan Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 4:48 PM
Hi John. Hopefully my Haiku will be liked. Thank you.
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