Warm Adoration

Lover #1
warm adoration
sweeter sensitive honey
sharp as a stinger

Lover #2
warm hibernation
stays affections forever
hushed sincere nectar
incessant internally
glorifies natural start

written for
Sponsor Debbie Guzzi 
Contest Name Love Talks
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 10, 2011 at 11:18 AM
dear friend these are very good little free verses, words like "hibernation" are mind words giving to scent nor sound nor taste evoking no emotion as are the words adoration, senstive, and incessant. The words HONEY & STINGER are great..more like this/"trap/freeze a moment in the haiku line 1 subject, line 2 & 3 action// line three IS a good cutting visceral line!
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