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War Zone

My life is under attack Enemies hiding in shadows Snipers, ruining me so silently Fighting an enemy I can't see No hands to hold Everyone is against me Including you The insides of me Betraying me Twisting me into despair Grab your weapon Target right at me But watch me stand after each hit Because I am better than these shadows Take a step back, After each blow Then regain myself I don't need a gun I don't need you I don't want it either Keep targeting me Knocking me down I am saving it all up To come running, Attacking you all Shattering this world Once I am free Life will be different Wait and see Always had a dream to be different To stand out To be important, this is me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/12/2014 5:07:00 PM
This is so good, I thought for a second I wrote it!!!! :) Loved this one!!!
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Princess Xia
Date: 9/13/2014 10:57:00 AM
Hahah thank you Arthur
Date: 8/23/2014 1:20:00 PM
Beautiful write Princess. How beautifully you have sketched the war zone, which always works in our mind and heart. A good attempt to reveal the inner enemy and thank you for your kind words on my Poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Princess Xia
Date: 8/23/2014 8:22:00 PM
Thank you Ravindra

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