War In the Trenches

Men and boys answered the call
Some returned home, others did fall
Young volunteers' thought an adventure it would be
Older ones joined up to defend their country.

Constant bombardments' all night and all day
No place to hide, they just had to stay
Stuck in the trenches with mud knee deep
Explosion's and gunfire, no chance could they sleep.

Some were injured and they sent them away
Others not so lucky and they died that day
Conditions were atrocious, with fire and rain
With disease and vermin adding to their pain.

Freedom they bought us but paid a heavy price
And they'd do it again, they wouldn't think twice
But we live in a land now that's happy and free
And we remember the sacrifice they gave for their country.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 5/31/2023 9:17:00 AM
The life of soldiers in trenches is so frightful and miserable. They live in constant fear of getting killed anytime. These people guard our country and ensure us our freedom. We have to bow our heads in great respect when we think of the sacrifices they undertake. Great thoughts dear Tom.
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Date: 5/31/2023 10:05:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, sometimes wars are necessary to defend a country and many put their lives on the line to defend it. But it comes with a price the loss of life or PTSD. We must never forget their sacrifice. Tom
Date: 9/3/2022 5:06:00 PM
Whatever these men were compelled to endure is a nightmare that cannot even be described. Our lack of appreciation for such expenditures that have been made to ensure our liberty is entirely reasonable.
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Date: 9/4/2022 11:07:00 AM
Thank you Lasaad, have read many stories of the first world war and conditions were atrocious. Many were young boys made to believe it was a big adventure. Tom
Date: 1/16/2018 10:47:00 AM
This should be read out on Remembrance Day Tom - they gave the ultimate sacrifice so we can be free although of course wars rage on around the world i hope I never see the day we experience the horror of war for ourselves:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/16/2018 12:15:00 PM
Jan, Sadly, sometimes they are necessary to protect us from evil dictators. But the horrors some must see you just cannot imagine. Regards Tom.
Date: 12/15/2017 1:03:00 AM
This is an unimaginable horror what these men were put through.we don’t fully appreciate the price that has been paid for our freedom.
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Date: 12/15/2017 2:55:00 AM
Your right, we take so much for granted but if they had not made the sacrifice things would be so much different.But if we look the other way then evil will triumph. Regards Tom
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