War Factory

War
Drawn out from Factories 
in Assembly line 
as always seen
spanning
all kind and all time
horizons

War
Blueprinted consistently
to win an idea or a space
or anything our fancy

War
Somebody has a right
and the supremacy
to feel bored 
why should everybody
feel we are all right
we are intact
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 20, 2016 at 10:15 AM
pankaj, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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March 21, 2018 at 7:48 AM
Dear Linda, I feel so honoured to receive your precious comments.Few mistakes are there.Apologies for the 3 years delay in thanking you.I read few of your abundantly expressed poetries.You are so prolific.Thanks again and again.pankaj
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December 20, 2015 at 2:24 PM
PANKAJ, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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March 21, 2018 at 7:50 AM
Dear Skatlove, thank you so much for commenting on my poem.It has few mistakes.I am so sorry in replying with extreme delay.Poets rock.Thanks again.pankaj
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