War and Peace In the Time of Love's Retribution

"War and Peace in the Days of Love’s Retribution"
All is fair in Love and War they say Lost are the gambling angels who walk tight ropes from the point where time departed the jewel stolen from her crown sacrificed for something better a child’s happiness another fallen goddess tripping between the cracks pinned to a wall in a sunless place where light tries but fails dismally to get in suspended heart’s arrow caught forever bleeding in betrayal’s sticky web Failure’s warrior wanting a sword for cutting tongues War and Peace lost and found unconditional In the time of unjust justice follows freedom wearing a new light darkly burning in the time of Love’s retribution (LadyLabyrinth / 2020) gvlm
"Hurts Like Hell" / Fluerie https://youtu.be/Uil0L-0F4no
"“Once I was brave enough to leave home, I discovered splendid parts of me I had no clue existed. I, then, realized where they came from and hurried home.”
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Date: 10/11/2020 4:44:00 AM
A gem and a fine fav too.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/11/2020 8:36:00 PM
Thank you Lindley.
Date: 10/11/2020 4:42:00 AM
The dark in humanity always seeks to invade. To destroy love, joy and life itself. Love being an Avenue to make or break a soul. As its power to destroy equals its power to gift happiness and joy. Oft even excels that power. If one seeks only to take, one will always lose.. YOur poem is truly inspiring .. GOd bless.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/11/2020 8:36:00 PM
Life can get real dark sometimes Lindley, as you well know. x
Date: 10/11/2020 4:37:00 AM
The dark in humanity always seeks to invade. To destroy love, joy and life itself. Love being an Avenue to make or break a soul. As its power to destroy equals its power to gift happiness and joy. Oft even excels that power. If one seeks only to take, one will always lose.. YOur poem is truly inspiring .. GOd bless.
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Date: 10/4/2020 6:23:00 AM
Finding truest love is a war in itself. We can only open the window and smell the ocean breeze and await for our blue sky.
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Ts Poetry
Date: 10/4/2020 7:37:00 AM
touché ... Smile Modesty it's going to be a beautiful day xx
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/4/2020 7:13:00 AM
This poem is not about finding truest love. That being said, if one sits on their a** smelling the ocean breeze and "waiting' for a blue sky, you may as well perch in purgatory for the rest of your life. Come rain or shine, Time waits for no man.... :)
Date: 10/3/2020 6:23:00 PM
Great imagery and words! My favorite part / caught forever bleeding in betrayal’s sticky web / Saved to my faves to read again. :) Peace, Angie
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/3/2020 6:29:00 PM
x. Thank you.
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