Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Narrative

War- a Cherita Suit

 Terrified in a corner

She screams
Hearing the rockets 

Exploding
Shattering her heart
Once more...


They shake

Their heads not accepting
Is happening again

Forced to move out
They leave their homes
With no place to go


The horrors of war

Are just to many
To count

No food, no water
No help
Just missiles

Destruction and death

Piles stacked up
Of smoking debris

Mangled bodies
Carried out
Breathing no more

Innocence

In their eyes
Long gone

Just horror
And pain for those
Children to witness

A treated of Peace

That can't never work
For a long time

Permanent Peace
Only till Jesus
Returns!


Dorian Petersen Potter
Aka ladydp2000
Copyright@2014


10.12.2014

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Paul Schneiter November 24, 2014 at 5:37 AM Dorian: This poem states, with compelling emotion, the stark horror of war. You say with poetic eloquence what needs to be said, over and over again. Thank you, thank you.

Eve Roper November 4, 2014 at 10:46 AM Your are such a good artist Dorian. I also pray for love and peace. :) hugs and love eve Dorian Petersen Potter November 4, 2014 at 11:05 AM Thank you so much my dear sweet friend Eve for your very warm comments! You always make me happy with your presence and special friendhip. :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Jasonpoet Boyd October 13, 2014 at 6:58 PM I am anxiouse for His return as well. Come Lord Jesus come. Dorian Petersen Potter November 4, 2014 at 11:02 AM Hope He does, the sooner the better! Thank you Bobb for yor visit and all. It means a lot to me. Love and hugs! :) xxxx D.

Victor Satekge October 13, 2014 at 12:02 PM Wow Dorian, brilliantly conveyed , though very sad indeed. Thank you for sharing Dorian. Dorian Petersen Potter November 4, 2014 at 10:59 AM Thank you Victor! I appreciate your kind comments and all my dear friend. Love and light! :) Xxxx D.

Jack Ellison October 13, 2014 at 10:19 AM And yet another human tragedy!!!!! So so sad my dear Dorian! XXX Dorian Petersen Potter November 4, 2014 at 11:10 AM Yes, it is! Very sad, always wars are. Thank you so much for your visit and kind comments. take care! :) love and hugs! Xxxx D.

Tim Smith October 12, 2014 at 10:40 PM Very beautifully written but sad Dorian... Hugs Tim Dorian Petersen Potter November 4, 2014 at 11:12 AM Thank you Tim! Hugs! :) love and light!xxxx D.