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War

WAR somewhere along the line denoting rational behavior there must be a space a space devoid of reason is life a matter of lines and spaces? Dave Austin

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Date: 6/27/2016 4:13:00 PM
oh i had missed commenting here for some reason. This is excellent, Daver!
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Date: 6/19/2016 5:35:00 PM
This Tanka is a master question, truly makes one think..
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Date: 6/18/2016 2:29:00 PM
"WAR" must be a bold black line, like an angry slash? No one wishes for it and a scant minority will want or need it. This one is a mind bender, Daver! Wishing for you the tranquility of peace! Keep well and hoping you will have a wonderful Father's Day! Best wishes, Love, Mikki
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