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War

Blood flowing, scattered bones and bodies lay forlorn, forgotten on battle field Screams still ring out as cannons fire just pure carnage ravens feast on dead flesh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/26/2015 4:32:00 PM
Bold and vivid imagery...well written! Chills went up my spine as I read.
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Date: 1/24/2015 11:27:00 PM
War's not a good friend. Nothing good ever comes of it. Win or lose, war is war, and so much is lost. Love this ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/24/2015 10:06:00 AM
O war is so heinous Shadow. You have portrayed it so skillfully in this Tetractys.God bless you.Love and regards> Your friend Rajat PS: I have added it to my favlist.
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Date: 1/24/2015 8:02:00 AM
The facts of war are very unsettling..Enjoyed reading your very factual verse..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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