war

war dive bombers fly
fight over territory....
hummingbird feeder

naturehaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2024 3:46:00 PM

I really like this one. Clever.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/21/2024 3:35:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the compliment. Sara K

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/19/2024 12:42:00 PM

Survival of the fittest Sara every creature has to eat. Hope your week is off to a good start. Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/19/2024 1:53:00 PM

Yes, Tom, they do have to eat. They are very territorial and try to defend what they think is theirs. They would get more to eat if they would just fly in and get a slip, let others get a sip but alas, it doesn't work that way. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2024 1:38:00 AM

- Have to fight for the food ... great done, Sara :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/19/2024 8:37:00 AM

Thank you, Anne Lise. Your visits are always uplifting, and the smiley face adds a special touch. Sara K

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/19/2024 12:26:00 AM

Yes life has peace and war.. And we are in it for sure.' Mine is that of the write, I struggle against Self with inspiration to connect.. How much will I get right?

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/19/2024 8:36:00 AM

Sometimes, it is hard to get the right thoughts to go with what we are seeing or hearing in our life. Thanks for the visit, Joe, and taking time to comments. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 8/18/2024 8:38:00 PM

A very creative haiku this is dear sara, you do this form very well; always one worthy of reading! Love what youv done there. Sending you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/19/2024 8:35:00 AM

I appreciate the time spent here and for the uplifting review. Sara K