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War

Rata -tatatat, rata -tatatat, rata -tatatat the sounds pierce the cold laboring day air. Around corners and up stairs they come. Rata -tatatat, rata -tatatat, rata -tatatat bullets pierce splintering wood, and shattering glass, turning the snow red, as bodies fall. Off with their heads with a wood ax; accurate with every shot, a sniper's success. 5/13/2022

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Date: 5/18/2022 11:31:00 AM
Excellent, so well crafted and created. A sad story of reality my friend in war torn countries! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/14/2022 3:39:00 AM
Since the fall of man war was ever on man's mind. No end to it.
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Date: 5/13/2022 1:50:00 PM
Indeed, a disturbing word picture of the horrors of war. Along with everything else, war is simply reality...horrifying reality.
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Date: 5/13/2022 12:20:00 PM
War is ugly~and you have artfully expressed the images it holds. :)Paulette
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