Wanton Climb

When life’s traffic yearns for wanton climb,
I unleash as a gypsy of summertime.



What Makes You Tick Contest: Serene Roberts
by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 20, 2013 at 7:56 AM
a nice win Nette..............SKAT
A   Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 10:14 AM
Nette, , congratulations:) In Seren's "what makes you tick" contest... always~ Linda
Dietrich Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 10:17 PM
Now here is one of yours that I had not seen, Nette. It's quite charming. Congrats for your win.
Merryman Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 2:49 PM
You make me think of a free spirit, Nette. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Roberts Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 2:48 PM
Congratulations and thank you for entering my contest .... Seren
Gasun Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 11:56 PM
Wow! So beautiful and rich poem my very dear friend Nette! Hugging you tight on this gem as I can relate a little ;)) I thank you so much for the smiles. Good luck always! love lots, Leonora
Horsman Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 9:39 AM
so much you say here, so much about you too!
Carrillo Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 3:45 PM
A gypsy of Summer time. There is still time maybe you can read my hand. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest..... Lucilla
Ellison Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 7:59 PM
Very nice couplet Nette... you've got my vote! Hugs, Jack xoxox
Adams Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 6:37 PM
very nicely penned Nette, good luck in the contest :)
Sivey Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 4:53 PM
I see this being you my friend, the center of the summertime spirit! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous and enlightening poem this evening! Your piece here will do very well in the contest, I can tell by its incredible quality as compared to other poems that I've read! What a brilliant verse, Great Work!!
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September 11, 2013 at 1:36 PM
For me, I become more of a Problem Child of Summertime. It's a lot of fun. All the cool kids are doing it. ;-) Say no to traffic aka clutter! Very nice couplet!
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September 11, 2013 at 1:14 PM
Hey gypsy girl of summertime..Where do you wander?This is beautiful with a touch of yearn..Re drake s show..i guess this show i skip calling..but i try to do my best to listen to you.I will call in the following show if there s another one..big hugs : )
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September 11, 2013 at 10:54 AM
- Fun and unique...Nette! - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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