Wanting of a Soul

Wanting of a soul





Closer we came in love, for want of souls,
No trials, was sentenced a desired gaol,
Each breath in his detention renewed my life,
Vetoed cynicism, that put an end to all strife,
No wonder I didn't plead for a parole !







Written March 9th, 2015
On subject " love"
For contest "Love or hate pick a subject #2" by Shadow Hamilton 

Awarded 3rd place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lamoureux Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 9:08 AM
Congratulations on a fine win Upma.
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 9:06 AM
Congratulations Upma on win. Love>Rajat
Allison Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 3:34 PM
Great to see Limerick in the contest- many congrats on your win Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx
Nance Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 2:49 PM
Nice wit and clever subject, grats on your win :)
Callus Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 1:41 PM
Congratulations on a lovely win, Upma! A lovely Limerick written with love! // paul
Hamilton Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 9:14 PM
clever limerick Dr Upma congrats on 3rd place hugs
A. Sharma Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 4:23 AM
Thanks Shadow! So glad u liked this one!
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