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Sheer lust Two thrust . August 19, 2014. .
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Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 11:39 AM
Uniquely written..Congrats on your winning work!!! Sara
Fraser Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 3:34 PM
Unique is in the mind of the writer who finds. Thank you Sara, have a most lovely weekend, James....
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 7:56 AM
dropping back with my congrats - this made me giggle again thanks James:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Fraser Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 3:31 PM
It still makes me giggle as I ride on loves quakes. Have a lovely weekend, James...... :) xx
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 7:42 AM
- Yes, a few words tells a lot !!!! - Congrats my friend James !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Fraser Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 3:27 PM
The power of words within few, wow - thank you Anne Lise - have a lovely weekend - James :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 12:55 AM
a good sexy one, James!! Congrats in my contest and thanks for participating.
Fraser Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 3:20 PM
My pleasure Andrea, and thank you for recognising my poem - james.........
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 11:32 AM
................. Simple words ................ Hard to write ................... Really fun to read! - Good luck in the contest,James ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Fraser Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 4:26 PM
So few words, but tells so much. Thank you Anne Lise for your always kind comments - James...
A. Sharma Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 9:19 AM
Wow witty ones James ! This form is doing awesome !
Fraser Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 4:23 PM
Thanks Upma. I must try and write more of these in the coming weeks, hopefully - James.......
Nance Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 5:04 PM
Make it three and we'll call it good. Oh James I am fallin' for ya tonight sweetie, I dig this sexy side of you, even in humor it is intriguing :)
Fraser Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 6:34 PM
So few words, read, then heard. Aloud and proud, never absurd. For it's all about, just thee and she, it's what the joys of two, should always be <*> Glad you enjoyed my humble poem Casarah, James ;)
Allison Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 4:21 PM
Ha ha ha love it James - good luck in the contest - I've written about 5 lots of these recently and having such fun with this form:-) Do drop by my 'humourous narrative for lyric man' - I think you will appreciate the joke:-) hugs jan xxx
Fraser Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 4:25 PM
Hiya Jan, glad it made you smile as it did leave a twinkle in my eye, och aye whilst I was thinking/writing it. On my way to read ;) James xx
Smith Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 4:19 PM
ahh...awesome...lol
Fraser Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 4:32 PM
For a short Form, it's darned good fun Tim, James :)
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