Wanting

Wanting…
Fills up time and clutters my mind.
Make me happy, I don’t like waiting.
The unknown hurts.
Not knowing my heart – the worst pain of all.

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Bl Devnath

October 7, 2015 at 12:57 AM

It's a mystery happens in mind and heart even after having inner consciousness. Unnecessarily unexpected automatic wanting prizes the worst pain. A 7 It's a great insight my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Pat Davis

October 7, 2015 at 7:38 PM

Thank you BL. What a honor to have you and others take a look at my little poems. Connection makes the world a sweeter place. Pat

Avis Bailey

October 6, 2015 at 10:56 PM

Pat, this is a very good write. It makes you stop and ponder the many ways wanting has affected our own lives. Keep up the good poetry and congrads being featured this week. It is a honor.

Pat Davis

October 7, 2015 at 7:39 PM

Hi Avis, thank you for taking the time to read and comment! It is an honor and a gift. Pat

Floyd Neal

October 6, 2015 at 9:22 PM

Pat this is a thought provoking poem. Very nice flow. Keep up the great work

Pat Davis

October 7, 2015 at 7:40 PM

Thank you Floyd! Just getting started in all this on PS. My Lifetime PM was actually for my sister Pam DeRemer. Waiting for it to switch to her. :-) Pat

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

October 6, 2015 at 7:30 PM

Excellent poem. Sometimes, heart is not understood.

Pat Davis

October 7, 2015 at 7:41 PM

Thank you Nayda!

Andrea Dietrich

October 6, 2015 at 6:34 PM

Nice seeing this one featured here today. I like it.

Pat Davis

October 7, 2015 at 7:41 PM

Thank you Andrea! :)

Cori Wunderlin

August 26, 2015 at 11:45 PM

Pretty amazing did you know that you made it to the "home page" the week of August 30th. Great job!

Pat Davis

August 27, 2015 at 3:40 PM

Thank you Cori! Yes, amazing that my little poem is on the home page! Wow! Not sure why; and happy to writing at all. This is fun on Poetry Soup. :) I'm still learning my way around the PS site. Thanks for the encouragement. Pat

Ilahtpan Napthali

August 25, 2015 at 7:52 AM

Not only an amazing piece, but "seasoned" too!

Pat Davis

August 27, 2015 at 3:42 PM

Thank you Ilahtpan for reading and commenting. I'm am new at this and I'm having fun with this inspiring site full of poetry. My seasoning must be my ripe old age! :) Pat