Doris Culverhouse Poet Free verse

Wanting

Need
Revisited before and again
Dreams as pain
Longing like rain
On desert's dry sand,
Breeze in the heat
Refresh and hope
Words come like rain, flowing so naturally
Puzzle together a Monet
A sonnet
Wanting a dream come true.

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Curtis White March 27, 2011 at 6:58 AM I can see that your dream has come true. mMay God continue to bless you.

Linda Witt-King January 23, 2010 at 12:17 PM This is a beautiful write, Doris. One can only wonder how something as profoundly descriptive like this emerges from consciousness as a whole thought. Well done indeed.

Tim Ryerson January 22, 2010 at 3:23 PM Beautifully done as usual, Doris...I have sent you Soup Mail (from the comments below I see that one of my questions is already answered!) - Tim

John Loving Iii January 22, 2010 at 1:48 PM were'nt weall in this desert for a while? john

Carol Sunshine Brown January 22, 2010 at 9:27 AM Amazing Doris just Amazing. Please continue giving us a lift with your poetry. Love, Carol

James Peranteau January 21, 2010 at 5:00 PM Doris,..you have meshed together words poets dream of ! I just love this write ! Great poem Doris !!!! james

Sara Kendrick January 21, 2010 at 4:48 PM Interesting thoughts put to pen in this one. Like the lines starting Breeze in the heat forward. Mom

Gert W. Knop January 21, 2010 at 3:49 PM Yes, words give us everything. Thank you for your kind comments, Doris. Nicely penned!...Gert

Sean Kelly January 21, 2010 at 11:53 AM Your words did not want for anything , here , Doris and may your dream come true ......

Daniel Cheeseman January 21, 2010 at 11:24 AM May your wishes be granted, beautiful write Daniel