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Wanting

Need Revisited before and again Dreams as pain Longing like rain On desert's dry sand, Breeze in the heat Refresh and hope Words come like rain, flowing so naturally Puzzle together a Monet A sonnet Wanting a dream come true.

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Curtis White

Date: 3/27/2011 6:58:00 AM

I can see that your dream has come true. mMay God continue to bless you.

Linda Witt-King

Date: 1/23/2010 12:17:00 PM

This is a beautiful write, Doris. One can only wonder how something as profoundly descriptive like this emerges from consciousness as a whole thought. Well done indeed.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 1/22/2010 3:23:00 PM

Beautifully done as usual, Doris...I have sent you Soup Mail (from the comments below I see that one of my questions is already answered!) - Tim

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/22/2010 1:48:00 PM

were'nt weall in this desert for a while? john

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/22/2010 9:27:00 AM

Amazing Doris just Amazing. Please continue giving us a lift with your poetry. Love, Carol

James Peranteau

Date: 1/21/2010 5:00:00 PM

Doris,..you have meshed together words poets dream of ! I just love this write ! Great poem Doris !!!! james

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2010 4:48:00 PM

Interesting thoughts put to pen in this one. Like the lines starting Breeze in the heat forward. Mom

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/21/2010 3:49:00 PM

Yes, words give us everything. Thank you for your kind comments, Doris. Nicely penned!...Gert

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/21/2010 11:53:00 AM

Your words did not want for anything , here , Doris and may your dream come true ......

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 1/21/2010 11:24:00 AM

May your wishes be granted, beautiful write Daniel