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Wanting

Oh, oh! pity party I want my old house back I want it summer windows open curtains fluttering in the ocean breeze I want my carpet sofa chairs desk etagere coffee table piles of books and magazines I want my little kitchen chopping block island glass-front cabinets with the Chilmark pottery I want my garden rhododendrons Montauk daisies the curved path with axioms carved into flat stones I want my white-fenced yard garden shed made by the Martha’s Vineyard High School carpentry class I want my wide-railing porch settee swing and chair blue and white striped cushions flower baskets hanging all around I want my friends, my neighborhood ocean beach plums wild grapes for the picking I want my old home back

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Date: 6/25/2024 10:07:00 AM
Well-done. The fragmented formatting enhances the (relatable) longing for the past. Thanks for sharing this poem.
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 7/25/2024 5:59:00 PM
Sorry I haven't thanked you for your comment. I have been away for several weeks and got caught in the world-wide tech glitz flying back! At 95, not fun! Yours was an appreciated response. I don't do a lot of fragmented pieces, but I find works well in some poems.

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