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I'm looking for another heart, a new one, por favor, See, mine is cold and broken - I don't want it anymore ... It served me well for quite a while, and beat with rhythm, sure, But its seams are torn and ragged since I heard "goodbye" from her. I only want a meager one - I don't plan to use it much, Not for joy or hope or loving, just pumping blood and such. I won't need help exchanging it, of that, I have no doubt ... There's no surgery required ... she already cut it out.

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Date: 11/23/2019 5:55:00 PM
What a great write G, sad but well done!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/19/2019 2:15:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, John, as always my Poet Brother! :o)
Date: 11/15/2019 9:05:00 AM
This is beautiful.. What a lovely poem.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/19/2019 2:15:00 AM
That's very kind of you, Funom, thanks so much, brother! :o)
Date: 11/12/2019 11:45:00 AM
Wow - poignant, Gregory. Well penned. Very touching. A FAVE for me.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/19/2019 2:15:00 AM
That's very sweet of you, Line, I thank you so much! :o) <3
Date: 11/12/2019 6:11:00 AM
you are crazy talented. loved it!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/19/2019 2:14:00 AM
You are very kind, Fred, and I thank you so much! Blessings, my friend! :o)
Date: 11/12/2019 4:55:00 AM
##There's no surgery required ... she already cut it out.## Wow.. That is a beautiful poem.. Congrats..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/19/2019 2:14:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you for the comment, Jenish, and thank you for stopping by my page - blessings, my friend! :o)

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