Wanted: Dead and Alive

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Owl Grass Mouse Predator And - Free photo on Pixabay

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*Image of Owl Grass Mouse Predator by Pixabay. WANTED: Dead and Alive *A paradox ... A bird soundly heard by my window a mouse scurries about my floor I wish they exchange places with the mouse outdoors and the bird indoors so I acted upon it owl hoots inside traps outside for pet food 2021 July 15

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/19/2021 5:59:00 AM

What a great photo. I also enjoyed your poem. I’m with Milt, I would prefer both outside my home.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/19/2021 11:57:00 AM

The (owl) heard forced the mouse indoors of this night owl's home.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/15/2021 2:26:00 PM

I hope your solution worked, but I'm wondering what you would do with a bird (a hawk, I presume) inside? I'd be terrified of those talons! Good writing, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/15/2021 4:11:00 PM

What creatures events one who's a night owler, Milt, thanks for your insightful share my friend, Aloha!