Want You

My eyes burn as i look at you
 with your snake tattoo, blue jeans, 
 you make my heart thump
 a piece of me wants you to be mine
 As i put on my sun dress, i feel your eyes all over me
 like a bee to the honey, your sticky sweet
 all over me i know thats where you want to be
 A drunk love baby it's just you & me
 Whispers soft off the bitterness of your tounge
 your words are sharp, baby your breaking my heart
 A theif, a liar i can't live without you, 
 I just forever want you, want you, want you....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kearley Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 11:50 PM
It reads like you have a crush on somebody? Ha,ha. Nice write.
Falotico Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 3:38 PM
Tender piece on desire and wanting.. hugs form Santa Michael
Anish Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 10:05 AM
A blue - jeaned baby doll - something to think about. Nice work Matthew Anish
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 4:10 PM
A good and lovely poem Kerry. - Wishing you a relaxing weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Scott Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 6:40 AM
very provocative peace nice poem thankyou for comments on mine xx davidscott
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