Want Vs Need: A Child's Journey

Last Christmas little Anne dashed to the tree. The gift she most desired, would she see? Her folks were poor, but Santa’s not! The coat she got—she needed, but Santa’d not heeded her one-plea letter for the better present, a little doll-- one that drinks, wets, and cries “MAMA!” Anne thinks When will this grand prize be mine, as I have planned? while she SAYS, “I love my coat.” A few years hence she'll understand why some get a coat; some, a sailboat; others, a sweet doll on which they can dote.
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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 6:08 PM
Hello Janice yes want and need. Two different meanings. The little girl was better off with the coat she needed. Have a nice evening my friend.
Canerdy Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Thanks so much, Darlene! Janice
Warrior Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 2:09 PM
A lovely Etheree Janice...congrats on your excellent win...love & light...^WW^
Canerdy Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 3:33 PM
Winged Warrior, thank you so much! Janice
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 2:31 PM
I am so happy to see this wonderful poem win First Placement Janice. You deserved it! You know I faved it! Congratulations! xxoo : )
Canerdy Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 2:44 PM
Connie, thank you for these kind words! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 9:02 AM
Back with much deserved congrats for your gold medal win with your emotional poem, Janice. Love the form, love the message.
Canerdy Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 2:11 PM
THANK YOU so much, Line! Janice
Ward Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 12:48 AM
Exactly... Dolls are important for fostering the desire to become mothers one day. I enjoyed your poem enough to award it first place in my contest, so congratulations, Janice.
Ward Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 11:10 AM
I'm so pleased, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 6:34 AM
Julia, I am THRILLED. Thank you so much. I'm grinning from ear to ear! Janice
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 2:35 PM
I used to be that child Janice. I only wish my mother had explained how poor we were. Children can handle the truth much better than pretence. This is a beautiful write that understands the yearning heart of a child. Excellent and a fave! : )
Canerdy Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 4:07 PM
Connie, I am so TOUCHED by your comment. Parents sometimes presume too much about what children REALLY understand. THANKS! Janice
One Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 3:58 PM
What an excellent double etheree, this used to be one of my fave forms.... You did it very very well...
Canerdy Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 4:00 PM
Thank you SO MUCH, S.O.! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 12:45 PM
Love your presentation, Janice. Beautiful poem.
Canerdy Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 3:25 PM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 11:42 AM
Awesome lesson in your poem..well crafted as always..Best for a win, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 3:26 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay! Janice
Tapestry Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 10:49 AM
Beautifully crafted ;)
Canerdy Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 11:10 AM
THANK YOU so much! Janice
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