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Want To Live,But No Bread For Me

Iam Hungry...Thirst is uncontrollable
It nearly kills me,Cries a poor one..
A dirty wasteland that is his home
but its a heaven for him,His mom
sick in the bed,He is handicapped.
Worms are eating his skinny body,NOBODY to help him!
He is helpless...he want to live 
But waiting for death,Help him god i pray to you....

Copyright © Nivitha Ann Paul | Year Posted 2009

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Black Eyed Susan Date: 6/10/2011 9:25:00 AM Your poem is so evocative of sadness and suffering. I hope those kinds of prayers are sincerely listened to and answered! p.s. why haven't you been posting poems? Login to Reply

Jay Loveless Date: 2/19/2010 10:58:00 AM ): sad write. horrid in the visions. beautiful imagry though. and truly an amazing job. Login to Reply

Susan Palli Date: 2/18/2010 1:06:00 PM so unjust, this world Login to Reply

Argho Chakraborty Date: 10/28/2009 10:47:00 AM Wonderful work to put the feeling into word..!! great job..!! Login to Reply

Argho Chakraborty Date: 8/27/2009 4:42:00 AM Interesting thoughts... Hi Yes I am an Indian.... Bengali by birth... but stay living in Delhi... So have the best of both...:) Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 8/14/2009 5:22:00 AM Isn' it a shame that those pictures exist? I feel deeply touched with your words, Nivitha. And thanks for your comment on Breathless. Gert Login to Reply

Priscilla Cockburn Date: 8/10/2009 12:08:00 PM made me tearful im passionate about reaching the poor, good work its a hard subject to write about. I was really burdened to read your poem it shone out, makes you think Thank you Lord Priz Login to Reply

Date: 8/8/2009 12:54:00 PM What a sad situation. Heartfelt piece. Through God all things are possible. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Karen Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/8/2009 8:02:00 AM I am so happy to have the time to read your excellent poetry this beautiful Saturday morning Nivitha. Keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Diane Christian Date: 8/8/2009 7:25:00 AM a gret poem, so well described how much the hungty suffer, best wishes if you entered the slice of bread contest, thanks for your comments God bless you from diane Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/8/2009 7:09:00 AM Your work is excellent to remind us that there are needs that are not being met in our world. Keep writing. Sara Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 8/8/2009 6:31:00 AM Nivitha - Wow I don't even know how to begin to comment on this deeply compassionate poem - Outstanding expression - God Bless, MJ Login to Reply