Nivitha Ann Paul Poet Free verse

Want To Live,But No Bread For Me

Iam Hungry...Thirst is uncontrollable
It nearly kills me,Cries a poor one..
A dirty wasteland that is his home
but its a heaven for him,His mom
sick in the bed,He is handicapped.
Worms are eating his skinny body,NOBODY to help him!
He is helpless...he want to live 
But waiting for death,Help him god i pray to you....

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Black Eyed Susan June 10, 2011 at 9:25 AM Your poem is so evocative of sadness and suffering. I hope those kinds of prayers are sincerely listened to and answered! p.s. why haven't you been posting poems?

Jay Loveless February 19, 2010 at 10:58 AM ): sad write. horrid in the visions. beautiful imagry though. and truly an amazing job.

Susan Palli February 18, 2010 at 1:06 PM so unjust, this world

Argho Chakraborty October 28, 2009 at 10:47 AM Wonderful work to put the feeling into word..!! great job..!!

Argho Chakraborty August 27, 2009 at 4:42 AM Interesting thoughts... Hi Yes I am an Indian.... Bengali by birth... but stay living in Delhi... So have the best of both...:)

Gert W. Knop August 14, 2009 at 5:22 AM Isn' it a shame that those pictures exist? I feel deeply touched with your words, Nivitha. And thanks for your comment on Breathless. Gert

Priscilla Cockburn August 10, 2009 at 12:08 PM made me tearful im passionate about reaching the poor, good work its a hard subject to write about. I was really burdened to read your poem it shone out, makes you think Thank you Lord Priz

August 8, 2009 at 12:54 PM What a sad situation. Heartfelt piece. Through God all things are possible. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown August 8, 2009 at 8:02 AM I am so happy to have the time to read your excellent poetry this beautiful Saturday morning Nivitha. Keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol

Diane Christian August 8, 2009 at 7:25 AM a gret poem, so well described how much the hungty suffer, best wishes if you entered the slice of bread contest, thanks for your comments God bless you from diane

Sara Kendrick August 8, 2009 at 7:09 AM Your work is excellent to remind us that there are needs that are not being met in our world. Keep writing. Sara

Michael Jordan August 8, 2009 at 6:31 AM Nivitha - Wow I don't even know how to begin to comment on this deeply compassionate poem - Outstanding expression - God Bless, MJ