Want

I'm the monkey on your back, I'm the whisper in your ear.
I fill your heart with want, stare, covet and leer.
You think I'm not a part of you, believe that I'm not there.
And then I curl up on your lap and take you unaware.

The cattle always crave to graze the grass beyond the fence.
No matter who the landlord is no thought of recompense.
Likewise the dog will gaze upon the bone chewed by his mate.
It must be worth more than mine, no reason for him to wait.

You think that you are the one who is always in control.
Insidious as it may sound I can get to you, right to your very soul.
Incongruous it really is I don't like to be known.
I plant the seed, water it and wait until it's grown.

I'm sure you've worked out who I am and the work I can perform.
You convince those close to you and even yourself, that you do not conform.
I make you wish you had it all, then drop you feeling empty.
I'm not your friend, compatriot, you know my name is envy.

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Date: 11/20/2017 11:32:00 AM
I Envy seems to fade as one aes. Perhaps because we have had a chance to see the outcome of the green grass.
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Date: 6/29/2017 11:57:00 AM
Found this wonderful write by accident on 'best of all time' list. I love the way you describe it (envy) ... the cattle wishing to graze beyond the fence ....... as in the grass is always greener on the other side. Envy can be dangerous to nurture ........ it is NOT your friend, as you stated. :)
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Date: 6/29/2017 4:32:00 PM
Thanks Lenna for your kind words and visit to my poetry
Date: 5/29/2017 11:43:00 AM
Good Afternoon Craig. Wow. Take a bow. Well done and expressed. Envy is such a big word as is want. This entry is solid. Thank you for sharing. It appears to be well thought out and executed. Enjoy the afternoon.
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Date: 5/30/2017 1:27:00 PM
thanks Lisa
Date: 12/8/2015 4:47:00 AM
A simple one word title... but what a wealth of insight you bring to it. Splendidly written with your customary couplet rhyming, powerful phrasing and imagery. Well done again my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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