Wanna See My Thing

Wanna see my thing It pulsates really quite fast My new food mixer © Jack Ellison 2015

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Silent One

Date: 1/28/2018 3:40:00 PM

Haha... Great tongue in cheek haiku..

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/28/2018 4:01:00 PM

Bet I had you fooled eh... you probably turned away from the screen!!! My apologies, sorry!!!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/13/2015 10:56:00 PM

They do tend to pulsate fast. :) 7

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/14/2015 7:49:00 AM

Did I fool you!!! LOL Naughty man!!! Hugs, Jack xxx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/13/2015 1:35:00 PM

geez, you are a hilarious bone,jack... I needed this today!.. huggs

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/13/2015 1:51:00 PM

Just going through a phase... do you know of any antidote I can take? LOL Huggsies, Jack xx

Carol Eastman

Date: 3/13/2015 11:17:00 AM

Think it's time to get a play date out of the house... Dragon cried about the little mouse... We'll come back real soon... For now the new tune... of haiku's are keeping me at a loss.

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/13/2015 1:49:00 PM

Well thank you... I think! LOL Hugs, Jacko xx

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 3/13/2015 8:27:00 AM

Snickers...thanks for the morning chuckles.

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/13/2015 8:37:00 AM

YUM! Love Snickers too... oh thought you meant the candy bar!!! Silly old man! Huggsies, Jack xx

Jan Allison

Date: 3/13/2015 8:25:00 AM

ha ha ha -love it :-) Hugs Jan xx Cant wait to see what John posts in response to this

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2015 8:38:00 AM

no idea - but if they do hold a candle to him I hope he'snot eaten beans lol - do drop by and see me too:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/13/2015 8:36:00 AM

John's a good man but he can't hold a candle to this dude... what the hell does that mean??? LOL Hugs, Brother Jack xx