B. Maxine Revolution Poet Rhyme

Wanderland-Wanderlust

Walking amongst the wooden giants at night
The only light was the bright I was giving off
I slothed through the land taking it all in
I couldn’t even begin what mental state I’m in
On a natural vibe I am a one woman tribe
Warrior of the night 
Lioness, princess of nature.
It craters me in its beauty
Complex continuity
I frolic and I talk to it
Come with me
To the land of lovely 
I’ll walk thee to the highest point
Of your body and mind you will be anointed with joy I want to deploy your passion
In the mansion of mother earths madness


Wanderlust Contest
8/11/14
B. Maxine

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Anne-Lise Andresen August 18, 2014 at 7:24 AM - A really beautiful poem, B. Maxine ! - Thank you ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Amitin August 14, 2014 at 9:37 PM yes alliteration is a groove rhythmically- tricky balance with content

Michael Amitin August 14, 2014 at 5:23 AM i'm glad for your hypnotic ride with holy candle blues- you have a rich poet's soul thanks on you recent poem Wanderlust-- i love this stanza...and if i can be so bold..... your body and mind will be anointed with joy as I deploy our passion in the kingdom of mother earths madness B. Maxine Revolution August 14, 2014 at 5:08 PM Great suggestion, but I wanted it to rhyme with passion :). I also lean towards almost an alliteration sense hence "mansion, mother, and madness". But Thank you :)

J. R. Corbin August 13, 2014 at 11:14 AM Excellent imagery. Very nicely written. Jim

Jan Allison August 12, 2014 at 4:18 AM wonderful imagery good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan x

Brittany Larson August 12, 2014 at 1:54 AM WOW! I am speechless after this. What beautiful imagery. Best of luck in the contest!