Wandering In Nature

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I am trying to learn Iambic Pentameter, so any help and suggestions is appreciated.

And from a child- I was quiet and odd, Choosing to read old books and write my words; I would wander in nature and be awed, Loving the songs and beauty of sweet birds. ______________________________ March 26, 2016 Iambic Pentameter

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/27/2016 12:34:00 PM

Nicely done Constance, seems pretty good to me, hope having great Easter, I'm in bed with cold. Blessings, Gordon

Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2016 2:20:00 PM

Gordon, thanks for visiting, I do think I am getting better at this, sorry to hear you are sick, I am having Easter with my family ~

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 3/26/2016 7:50:00 PM

Broken Wings...sure am glad that you chose to "read old books and write my words"....especially writing a wonder such as this! Nice! :-)

Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2016 8:01:00 PM

Walter, oh thanks for that nice comment, and I still read old books and write my words, lol, I love old books, have quite the nice collection over the years, there is something about the feel of an old book, the smell, I love them, others can have their kindles, not this girl, I need to hold a book ~

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/26/2016 7:15:00 PM

I'd say your well on your way B/W. Very nice rhythm and rhyme.

Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2016 7:21:00 PM

Charlie, thanks so much for the encouragement, I find this meter thing so difficult, and a bit restrictive to be honest, but I am determined to learn it !!