Wandering Clouds

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At the moment we are but
wandering clouds chased across the 
sky of existence
 
by 

the winds of necessity, and consumed 
by the sun of voracious time,

why 

do we waste our ephemeral life hating, 
instead of filling our hearts with love 
sublime?




© Demetrios Trifiatis
    20 November 2022

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2022 10:39:00 AM

- ... it would be a beautiful and peaceful world, my friend - <3

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/20/2022 12:16:00 PM

Yes, it would, dearest, Anne-Lise. One day, in the far future we would realize our mistake and correct it. Thank you. Hugs and blessings!

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/20/2022 7:34:00 AM

My friend, Demetrios, these are words to cherish and lead one's life. This a magnificent piece of writing that exhibits perfect respect and regard for one another and, if read, would change the world in a positive way.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/20/2022 9:06:00 AM

Another stunning comment from you, my friend, Lasaad. Thank you. Be blessed!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/20/2022 5:41:00 AM

Good question Demetrios, not sure anyone has the answer to it. Its only total love and respect for one another that will make our world a better place. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/20/2022 9:05:00 AM

I doubt if anyone knows the reason, my friend, Tom. Of course, there are some theological and philosophical answers but the space is too limited to display! Thank you so much. Blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/20/2022 5:24:00 AM

A precious write my friend. A FAVE from me for these words to treasure and live by.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/20/2022 9:01:00 AM

You are very generous, my dearest Vijay. Thank you for your heartfelt comment and the FAVE! I appreciate it. Be blessed!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2022 4:13:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one. Mostly one hates because they don't like themselves. If we work on us instead of trying to change someone else, then this would be a much better place. Way to go with this work. Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/20/2022 9:00:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, dearest, Sara. Stay blessed!