Waltzing With the Wind

Waltzing with the Wind

        See
        the breeze
     sway
        the leaves
   to-and-fro.
         Watch them
    dance
             around
   with the wind
  waltzing in time
      do-si-do
  as they
            move
  and swing
       with the beat.
    Only stop
    when
    the wind
    goes.

  7/3/2023
  Waltz wave poetry contest
  Emile Pinet (sponsor)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 9/8/2023 12:14:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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Christine Watts
Date: 9/10/2023 3:51:00 PM
Hi Jeanette Thank you for your review I am pleased you liked it Many Cheers Christine
Date: 3/12/2023 1:59:00 AM
Well constructed. A lovely poem Christine. Enjoyed
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Christine Watts
Date: 3/12/2023 7:36:00 PM
Hi Wendy Thank you and I was watching the trees leaves dance in the wind as this came to me Cheers Chris
Date: 3/7/2023 4:47:00 PM
A pretty beat…
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Christine Watts
Date: 3/7/2023 5:04:00 PM
Hi Kim Thank you for the dance Cheers Chris
Date: 3/7/2023 5:50:00 AM
Could be a children's poem, Christine:) Good luck!
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Christine Watts
Date: 3/7/2023 12:56:00 PM
Hi Daniel Thank you for your review my poem I suppose it could hadn’t thought of that Cheers Christine
Date: 3/7/2023 12:19:00 AM
So lovely Christine! Nice to see you back again….Debx
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Christine Watts
Date: 3/7/2023 12:58:00 PM
Hi Deb Thanks so much I enjoyed writing this one A fun challenge and I was just sitting and watching the leaves dance with the wind in my backyard quite mesmerising Cheers Chris x
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