Waltzing With the Wind

Waltzing with the Wind

        See
        the breeze
     sway
        the leaves
   to-and-fro.
         Watch them
    dance
             around
   with the wind
  waltzing in time
      do-si-do
  as they
            move
  and swing
       with the beat.
    Only stop
    when
    the wind
    goes.

  7/3/2023
  Waltz wave poetry contest
  Emile Pinet (sponsor)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Meadows Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 12:14 AM
A good poem. Well done.
Watts Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 3:51 PM
Hi Jeanette Thank you for your review I am pleased you liked it Many Cheers Christine
Volumes Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 1:59 AM
Well constructed. A lovely poem Christine. Enjoyed
Watts Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 7:36 PM
Hi Wendy Thank you and I was watching the trees leaves dance in the wind as this came to me Cheers Chris
Rodrigues Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 4:47 PM
A pretty beat…
Watts Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 5:04 PM
Hi Kim Thank you for the dance Cheers Chris
Turner Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 5:50 AM
Could be a children's poem, Christine:) Good luck!
Watts Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 12:56 PM
Hi Daniel Thank you for your review my poem I suppose it could hadn’t thought of that Cheers Christine
M  Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 12:19 AM
So lovely Christine! Nice to see you back again….Debx
Watts Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 12:58 PM
Hi Deb Thanks so much I enjoyed writing this one A fun challenge and I was just sitting and watching the leaves dance with the wind in my backyard quite mesmerising Cheers Chris x
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