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Waltzing With Roses

Hummingbirds and red blooms delight
I write as flowers near me dance
It smells as it moves through my mind

My mind's pane touts your skillful flight
I'm charmed by your bright, warm threads trance
Your poised, focused zen was confined

Humming wings yearn for roses, sprite
Sung in scale with hues that enhance
In pure skies, sight, lures, and views lined

With this cast, chirp was a swell sight
Bask in sun's room, bloom for romance
With mate, red rose's dawn is twined

Your weightless flight spells zeal and hope
Red rose catch the hummingbird scope.

Written: May 30th, 2023

Trilonnet Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May 

Image number: 3
Checked by HMS.COM: 8 Syllables/line

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Joseph May June 25, 2023 at 5:22 PM Congrats on your win Sotto, Very nicely done Sotto Poet June 25, 2023 at 5:50 PM Thank you so much, Joseph. Much appreciate my placement and your comment.

Jay Narain May 31, 2023 at 10:33 AM Hummingbirds are my favorite. Their quest for nectar is tireless and a beautiful sight. I like the love and hope seen in their flight. They are very inspirational.

Valsa George May 30, 2023 at 8:45 PM I love hummingbirds ! Earlier we used to spot one or two. Unfortunately they are not seen these days."Your weightless flight spells zeal and hope".... Love this in relation to humming birds. Lovely poem dear friend !

Kim Rodrigues May 30, 2023 at 3:08 PM Humming wings yearn for roses, its red blooms :)

Vijay Pandit May 30, 2023 at 2:55 PM Artistic interpretation of the image given, my friend. The hummingbird and the blooms are indeed a picture of delight and inspiration of your muse. Best to you, Lasaad.