Waltzing With Roses

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Hummingbirds and red blooms delight I write as flowers near me dance It smells as it moves through my mind My mind's pane touts your skillful flight I'm charmed by your bright, warm threads trance Your poised, focused zen was confined Humming wings yearn for roses, sprite Sung in scale with hues that enhance In pure skies, sight, lures, and views lined With this cast, chirp was a swell sight Bask in sun's room, bloom for romance With mate, red rose's dawn is twined Your weightless flight spells zeal and hope Red rose catch the hummingbird scope. Written: May 30th, 2023 Trilonnet Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May Image number: 3 Checked by HMS.COM: 8 Syllables/line

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Joseph May

Date: 6/25/2023 5:22:00 PM

Congrats on your win Sotto, Very nicely done

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/25/2023 5:50:00 PM

Thank you so much, Joseph. Much appreciate my placement and your comment.

Jay Narain

Date: 5/31/2023 10:33:00 AM

Hummingbirds are my favorite. Their quest for nectar is tireless and a beautiful sight. I like the love and hope seen in their flight. They are very inspirational.

Valsa George

Date: 5/30/2023 8:45:00 PM

I love hummingbirds ! Earlier we used to spot one or two. Unfortunately they are not seen these days."Your weightless flight spells zeal and hope".... Love this in relation to humming birds. Lovely poem dear friend !

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/30/2023 3:08:00 PM

Humming wings yearn for roses, its red blooms :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/30/2023 2:55:00 PM

Artistic interpretation of the image given, my friend. The hummingbird and the blooms are indeed a picture of delight and inspiration of your muse. Best to you, Lasaad.